Here's a favorite snippet:
Her breath came out in small, excited gasps, her teeth
bared, blood dripping down her chin. She
could hear the sound of her own growling, as her heart pounded in her
chest. Her vision began to clear slightly
and her team came into view, reminding her of another hunting party she had
hunted with. Just like that party, she
found all eyes staring at her, and recognized the familiar emotion…respect.
Zanas found herself face to face with him. She looked into his eyes searching for the other emotion she
always saw in people once they had truly seen her for what she was, a
predator. But she saw nothing but wild excitement
reflected in his eyes.
There was no fear.
~Chapter 8: First Blood
I think I got the best edit from the paper edit. What I didn't realize was how LONG it would take to enter all my changes into the comp. So I would def say the paper edit was scantier:) Just because of the time required. Thanks for the awesome question!
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